The Search

Yo, all of you asdf’ers! My name is Bleem and I’m a starving musician and poet! Even if you read my prose, I’ll still starve but I promise to die with a smile on my face… :-) Here is my first contribution ever on the web, called “The Search”. I hope you enjoy it and if you’d like, let me know what you think it is about (the answer may surprise you…)

The SearchTHE SEARCH (Part 1)

Awake, my love; hark!
Can you hear it?
Soundless as the otic temblors of doom
Our destiny awaits; awake, I say!

The torn gown is garishly glistening in the dew of dawn
The eyes brown still, elusive, darker, ebony
And yet
At peace with the sunrise of acceptance

More I cannot say; what more can I say?
The Foundling Crouch has been exposed in the Light
And the Canker Worm has been quenched at last, it’s insatiable thirst
Drowned in the New Day

Make haste my love; take my hand! The hour has come
To meet the Nebulous Nemesis
Only to find
A mirror
The Search (Part 2)
I long for your ageless beauty
Your spirit makes me spring in the soft light
Of your love.
You are my dream; mine alone

Let me not awake, I cannot bear
To lose you now!
Ephemeral being, your beams are a beacon of
My last hope

The realm of reality parts as a torn curtain
I see only you in the night watches, beckoning
Stay with me forever for I need to know if
You are really me

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Comments (29)

  1. John Tuesday - 18 / 12 / 2007 Reply
    Nice poem. What exactly is it about? I think it's about a reflection. Or narcissism or something. It really reminds me of a bird looking in the mirror.
    • Bleem Thursday - 20 / 12 / 2007 Reply
      Thanks, John! It's about...time I explained, lol! So, I thought I would do just that further down... (I like your ideas, though...)))
  2. Parakmh Tuesday - 18 / 12 / 2007 Reply
    Fantastic and way out of the ordinary poems i stumble on the net. Congrats my captain. Let me not awake I cannot bear To lose you now! I'll hold on to this. Thank you once again
    • Bleem Thursday - 20 / 12 / 2007 Reply
      And...thank YOU for your kind words, my friend (and Lieutenant)!
  3. Iris Tuesday - 18 / 12 / 2007 Reply
    What a wonderful Poem, ahh it touched me so much! Thank you!
    • Bleem Thursday - 20 / 12 / 2007 Reply
      I'm very happy that it did, Iris! Thanks)))
  4. Cherry Tuesday - 18 / 12 / 2007 Reply
    hmm,what is this poem about? i think it may be about the ghosts of the past; about people you loved once but still you can't forget them...
    • Bleem Thursday - 20 / 12 / 2007 Reply
      Thanks for your comment Cherry...and, good interpretation as well! To me, it's about my search for the Spirit of God within; as (at first) an elusive love, although ever waiting, wanting, to be at one with my very being. As I believe to be the case with each and every one of us! If you have the time to check out "Song Of Songs" in the Bible some day, you will discover some of the most beautiful romantic prose ever the most awesome author of all, God Himself!)))
  5. LittleDarkSecret Wednesday - 19 / 12 / 2007 Reply
    I love this so much, your way with words is inspiring and touching. Thank you for sharing this with us. <3
    • Bleem Thursday - 20 / 12 / 2007 Reply
      And, thank YOU so much for your encouragement! Don't I know you from somewhere? (Ha,'s my gf)))
  6. Kavita Friday - 21 / 12 / 2007 Reply
    Bleem! I didn't know you are a poet too. Good job! You are a master of many talents.-:)
    • Bleem Friday - 21 / 12 / 2007 Reply
      Coming from the Queen of Etail, I bow to your compliment...thanks, Kavita!)))
  7. Frannie Friday - 21 / 12 / 2007 Reply
    I love this poem and I love you very much Bleem-Filk! You are extraordinary in every way. I hope to see more of your poetry soon!
  8. Bleem Saturday - 22 / 12 / 2007 Reply
    I can't tell you how much that means to me, Frannie...and I only paid you half what I did the others to comment *sniff* ...seriously, one of my dearest friends ever, thanks!
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  10. shamal Monday - 18 / 04 / 2011 Reply
    Hey bleem,ur words are so great,I need your help,I'm really inlove with this guy that I'm going to marry soon,we are 11 years difference,his bigger! That's nothing though,we very inlove so could u please write me a poem 4 him,his excepting,calm,gentle etc
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